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Sermon Notes April 22 2007
God's tenderness from us is often hid
Severe so seem his mercies beckoning
Our hearts to sweet repentance--sin to rid--
And reconciliation harkening
So Joseph hid affection brotherly
To bring his sinful clan on bended knee
No other course for men with hearts so hard
Than putting his own brother under guard
Demanding too beloved Benjamin
To test their conscious rife with ancient sin
No different ours before a God who knows
Our soul from birth so caringly he shows
Just what must break, that worldly thing so dear
That to his greater love we might draw near.
April 25th, 2007 - 00:06
Well done! A creatively excellent idea to keep the mind alert & focused on the message while simultaneously synopsizing in sonnet structure.
Just curious – was the apparent missing iamb in the 13th line intentional (i.e. iambic tetrameter)?
April 25th, 2007 - 06:34
eh no; not intentional. Correction made. Thanks!